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Interesting Tree

End of the night.
Darkness.
The pitter patter of a pair of feet.
Noise.
The need for an excuse of silence.
Stop.
A tree, not much, yet, interesting.
Investigate.
Brown, bumpy, obviously wooden and yet
Comfortable.
Closer we move, a kiss, and then another.
Love.
The reason the tree was interesting.
Warmth.
Her skin was to my cold hands.
Soft.
Her lips were to my neck.
Safe.
The way I make her feel in my arms.
Goodbye.
The word I hate to say.
Trees.
Everyone needs one.

Author notes

This poem was written by my fiance. It's about a night that we didn't want to end.

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  • Sweet-Sins
    August 15
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    awww this is different and rally sweet
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  • GypsyEyes
    November 30, 2008

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    i like all the imagery you put in this one! i also enjoyed the tree reference! does anybody ever really want it to end? thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox