Under greenwood's soft cloak,
I wander.
The leaves silently hush and grow still,
as I see her.
Time stands still, waiting, breathless
Eager.
Her golden hair thumbs my heartstrings,
pulsing, pounding.
My most fabulous dreams becomes reality,
Caressing my soul.
Our lips touch gently, a life changing beauty,
We gasp.
My hands lightly trace the curves of her beauty, her soul,
Backs arching with need.
We fall happily into the bosom that is mother natures arms,
Lost in desire, lost in our fire.
This passion, this moment is meant to be,
The old forest knows all and smiles.
Breath and hearts perfect in rhythm, syncopated,
As one.
A deep slow penetration, of spirits joined,
Entwined here forever.
Our minds call as one, eyes locked in sweet fervor,
Complete so complete.
As our crescendo draws near minds interlocked,
Oblivious to the world.
The brightest glow of our simultaneous release,
Affects the old forest to its core.
Under greenwood's soft cloak,
We emerge as one forever.
28/11/08
Author notes
Image is The Enchanted Forest, and the artist is Stephen Perry.
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A contest entry
- The Enchanted Forest-adults only by JinSays.
404 points, ended December 2, 2008, 6 entries
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Comments
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We emerge as one forever.
really nice.
I like the softness here. There's some sizzle too, but mostly I see softness.
Great interpretation of this prompt, I wish you all the best,
Love,
jin

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Great poem. Loved everything about your poem. Good luck in the contest




