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to Thee Oh God

You are the spotlight
I need to find
To do as you ask
To help mankind

Your light will lead us
To where there is a need
Doing your work
Will enlighten the world

Soon there will be no darkness
We'll never need
A place from thee to hide
For in the darkness one is alone

 

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  • Sandygram silver member
    November 30, 2008

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    So Beautiful

    Your words are so uplifting and just what I need to hear this morning. Sometimes we get so overwhelmed we forget God is always there watching and caring. Hugs to you.

    Bless You,
    Sandy


  • Denerica
    November 29, 2008

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    I loved the line, a spotlight I need to find, could I just gently say that the "R" is off of your word you in the sentences You(r) light will lead us, Doing you(r)work. Loved the meaning of needing him and for us to share it with others.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    This is very much well taken thought you shared with us with the truth of the soul of yours..well said poetry...