A whisper in my ear, warns me that you're here
A nudge on my shoulder, warns me your about to get colder
You say you'll be here forever, and begin to bind us together
You're eyes glisten like a fire, and it shows me your desire
I try to go away, because we all know your plan for today
At this moment in time, you become more gray than a rainy day
And as you become to come near, I know you can smell every ounce of my fear
I pray to God to let me fly away, so I never have to deal with you one more day
I ask him to let me see the color in the rainbow, instead of the black and white I've learned to know
But we all know your plan for today, and I know there is nothing more I can say
Author notes
Option 4: Word Bank (rainbow, together, glisten, gray, fly, whisper)
A contest entry
- With prompts in mind..... by Hannie.
700 points, ended December 15, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice flow and use of the word bank...heart break weighs heavy on your heart and it show in the pain of your words...I hope you find peace soon...nicely done and strong emotions...
Best to you!
mystic
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Thanks
Glad you liked it
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That is such a great poem. A great take to the prompt. Thanks heaps for entering and good luck to you.
Hannie.
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