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Skies of Purple

Skies of Purple

Skies of purple how peaceful you look,
Everything so serene… looks like a book,
Two halves of the moon proudly displaying,
Like 2 souls slowly becoming one,
So much to see in these skies…
Clouds too that is so beautiful,
Everything here feels so full,
Tensions, stresses all being pulled,
The inner peace by watching this,
Is indeed beauty at its best,
The reflections of the skies,
Shadows on the water,
So peaceful and serene,
You could stay here forever.

Namaste Selfexpressive.

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  • Denerica
    November 29, 2008

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    Yes...captured peace here...and afterall purple is a color that shows His glory...blessings, beautiful.


    • Selfexpressive
      November 29, 2008
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      Thank you Denerica...

      Thanks so much Denerica for your kind comments on my poem... x

  • Bob Fox silver member
    November 28, 2008

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    Poet

    Perhaps a yearning for that love so very diffcult to explain other then in the beauty of a poets words.

    • Selfexpressive
      November 28, 2008

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      Thank you my friend for your comments and I agree... some how some things are difficult to explain though can be put down as poetry... x