For all the little girls and boys
Who hope for lots of shiny toys,
Remember this, for it is true,
Undercover elves are watching you!
Santa can’t be everywhere
So he sends his elves out here and there.
They hide all around, as quiet as mice
Waiting to tell if you’re naughty or nice!
If you are good they tell Santa so
And he lets out a happy “Ho Ho Ho!”
So don’t be naughty and cause a hullabaloo,
Because undercover elves are watching you!
Author notes
Photo by leeshylou
What a gorgeous picture!!!! 
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by leeshylou.
575 points, ended December 6, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very well done. I really enjoyed reading this. It made me smile....which doesn't happen very often.
Jenny -
lol i can't believe it!
I just looked behind me lol!
Where is your daughters page by the way hun?
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There is a link to her page on mine
Did you see one?? lol! Hope you have been good! lol!
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great poem - I have actually told my son Santa is watching him several times ill be sure to use the elf line from now on. Thank You for entering my contest
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Cool, that'll scare enough to be good... lol!
Fantastic!!!
Great narrative, rhyme, rhythm & flow with a delightful dark undertone that enthralled throughout & made me smile...
Well penned, well versed, well done!!!
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Aww what a lovely little poem, perfect for young children, especially the ones you want to be good
Beautifully penned with great rhyme and a neat flow! Good luck in your contest
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Oh Honey this is incredible! I love this! Would you mind if I share this with my grandbabies? I think they will get a kick out of it, and they are the perfect age for this
Great job!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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