Her lips throb my pulse,
and touch is my heartbeat.
My life dwells
in her arms,
paradise,
moments
spent together.
Author notes
Option 3.
Tell me in 20 words about your love.
A contest entry
- With prompts in mind..... by Hannie.
700 points, ended December 15, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice job. It is a great view of the lover of your life in very few words. Best of luck in the contest.
Mike -
Awesome poem. So very well written and a great take to the prompt. Thanks a bunch for entering and good luck!!
Hannie. -
My Dear Brother,
This sounds like one I know and love. What a great job you did on this one! Sounds perfect to me!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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This is true love here! Great job on this one and good luck in the contest
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Unrequited love, the emotional soul tie in just a few words...brilliant.
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