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Murder Tool

The greatest power is not for the blade to command
Instead, in the picture and the paint on my hand

Author notes

I used the second option. I don't think this is a good poem at all, but wanted to use a prompt that I wouldn't usually have used.

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  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    December 2, 2008
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    Nice job. This is a great two line rhyme. I like the message too.

    Mike


  • Hannie
    November 28, 2008
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    great poem. Very well written. Thanks 4 entering and good luck.

    Hannie.


    • DesolatELifE
      November 29, 2008
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      I just realised that I hadn't mentioned that I used the 20 word limit, accidentally, because I'd been thinking about doing the one with the 20 word limit.. That's why this is pretty crud. Heh.