Water ,water every where
nothing comes up to my mouth to share
With new drops of rain , rivers wear
a new coat ,to quench the living beings thirsting care.
Some flows fall from the high creeks with so much dare
and some streams, whirling round the earth, join the sea's layer
when the sun strikes hot , some quantities, evaporate and reach the giver
as a whole my conclusion is ,ultimately at all stages Almighty is the winning doer
Author notes
Poetic Form: Monorhyme - Prompt - Water
A contest entry
- Poetic Form: Monorhyme - Prompt - Water by Little Eagle.
600 points, ended December 28, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Thank you for your entry
Well you have definitly captured the prompt. Water can take so many forms it is true. You have rhymed each line increasing the line length as you went. I imagine it may have been difficult to keep the rhyme scheme. The flow suffered because of it. But a good try none the less.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy
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