I tried to keep it to a ten syllabic, but didn’t keep the male/female to their own verses because I wanted it interactive.
My eyes meet yours, I see the passion flare,
You capture mine, with your gaze you ensnare.
Your mouth gentle on mine, our tongues entwine,
You take possession, and yet you are mine.
I taste your smoke, and a minty freshness,
The passion of your kiss leaves me breathless.
Your teasing lips move down across my skin,
Leaving a trail of fire, ignites one within.
My body trembles from your tender touch,
It shudders and tremors, it aches so much.
Your torso against mine, I feel the heat,
I stroke your lean stomach, hear your heart beat.
You groan deeply, as my hand wraps round you,
Swollen and hard, God, yes, come touch me too.
My hand caresses, strokes upwards and down,
My thumb rubs over, encircles the crown.
My hand slides down, teases your smooth soft mound.
I guess you like that – from your gasp, the sound.
I must follow my quest, as my finger
Explores the warmth, you move as I linger.
Parting your legs, showing me the way,
The moisture of you, allows me to play.
Your manhood, so hard, firm, so inviting,
Nudges my palm; so hot, so exciting.
Your hips thrust forward as I touch you there,
Swear under your breath, don’t stop, don’t you dare.
My head moves down, my tongue flickers, teases,
You moan as my mouth continually pleases.
So good, so good, God, I need you right now,
But first I must lick you, taste you somehow,
Whisper my name, I hear the huskiness.
Breathe you right in, inhale the muskiness.
My tongue probes, and flicks, you open for me,
Jeez, how I want you, my fingers the key.
Hear you call out to me, beg for release,
Baby, must have you inside me .. now ..please
Pull you beneath me, then slowly slide in,
Your hand guides me as you take me within.
Control the pace, then deeper and quicker.
Hear my harsh breathing, my heart rate flicker.
Oh yes, oh yes, like that, don’t stop baby,
So close, so close, yes, no… now ….maybe.
The urgency now so intense, I must,
Faster and faster, can’t stop now, I thrust.
Sounds of our orgasms rip through the night.
God it feels so good, so perfect, so right.
Mmmmm.. baby… we hold on to each other
Smile in the afterglow - we recover.
This is from the POV of both lovers - is it too confusing?
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lol - it wasn't supposed to snap - it's a seduction. Thanks to everyone for their wonderful comments.
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It didnt snap and grab me, the way I wanted. A little tweaking... you can do it...
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Very well done, a journey into seduction. My best wishes.
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Sensual trailing to the erotic... a wonderfully written piece... Nicely done and pleasure to read.
Ken
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wow, this poem made me hottt! i would try an erotica poem, i am just afraid to go into details and people be looking at me like a whore because of my age. great job. i loved it. wish i could write a poem like this one! i loved it. made me want more!
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'Oh yes, oh yes, like that, don't stop baby,
So close, so close, yes, no... now... maybe.'
...you make it so close to reality...
i can relate myself to it...
and get the same enjoyment as perhaps you must have got while in action....
Gal
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You are a great magnificant wonderful writter I write like this but mine never has love love its just a lustful passionate type its not loving and tender always ends up being rough, hard and wild no matter how tender it begins
Sykoblkchic
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