Pourous Villians
at a festiville
Pour the laughs
seek the fun, seek the thrill
one sip of all 'lax
comes strai' pas'
make a pass at the empty glass
and
soak your lips in laps of all these pools
that whine whirl pools
liquid softly swirling round
conversations massly taking off ground
socially equipped, equipment of music
in the background
human fair ground, roller ride,
coaster for the glasses
host of gent
parades, worldly tenants fest banquix
a wee' of a bix
and a toast for the lasses
pour the other bottle up from the other one
festivillians flammencommence their artiser acoustics,
slowly strum the other chords
happily speak in marathon
wind up dancing queens
'laxful like sun
burninier minds, in a local event of fun
A contest entry
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Comments
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I definitely love the alliteration you have used in this poem. It's my favorite poetic device actually, but you probably knew that already
thank you for entering!
Leander -
hey up
hello there, thanks for the invite! welcome to the art feasted write.. although i'm not proud of this poem.. it's one i recently doubt. how be you?
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