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Imagine

The rainbow colors
together glisten; discouraging gray.
The sight encourages hearts to fly.
In a whisper, your heart does more.

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I chose option 3 and four together, 20 words, word bank.

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  • November-Dani
    December 2, 2008
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    Oh I vote this to win!!!
    So well done.

    Dani.


  • Hannie
    November 28, 2008

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    I love it. That is just brilliant. An excellent write. Thanks a bunch for entering. Very well done using both option 3 & 4.

    Hannie.

    • zorman32
      November 28, 2008
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      Thanks very much

      Glad you enjoyed the read!