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Daughters of the Night

Sisters of the night,

daughters of the moon light.

Your magic so enthralling

silence the demons, hear our calling.

 

We stand, surrounded by a fierce fire,

in a circle, begging you to extinguish the dire.

Hear us now, your witches' cry,

Save us from rivers of flames and fry.

 

We wail to thee,

set us free

Guardians of the White Moon,

banish this malevolence, deliver us from ruin.




Author notes

Hmm..I came across this contest and I thought it was interesting. I decided to write about a couple of good witches that have come across evil. The chant is them asking for strength and protection. I hope this is what the contest called for. I had fun writing this anyway. It has been ages since I've written anything with rhyme! =D

Picture Credit: http://fenrizulf.deviantart.com/art/Winter-Witches-43358913

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    An awesome write! You have done such a good job with this piece! I am sure it will place in the contest. Thanks for sharing and thanks for your comments as well. ♥


  • Lonely
    December 1, 2008

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    You have created the fantasy infront of my eyes. Im in awe. How can someone create such images with words! You are truly talented my dear friend! I love your work, best of luck in the contest

    Peace,
    Lonely


  • MD Masroor
    November 29, 2008
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    Good imagery here. Well written piece. Good luck in the contest.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 28, 2008

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    I was so mesmerized by this flawless write I almost didn't realise it was rhyming down the page

    Beautifully sad, this reaches a spot within the mind that doesn't always get explored.
    I love the final stanza

    Best of Luck
    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Periwinkle Blue
    November 28, 2008

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    Thank you for meeting the challenge of a rhyming chant. This poem you have written is enchanting and lovely. Very appealing to one's mystical senses.


  • Chocolate Dime
    November 28, 2008

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    ooh, flowy! rhyme came naturally too. cool nice poem


  • Joseph Hollis
    November 28, 2008

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    What a unique contest this is. I think you did an excellent job with the prompt given. Your words make the image of these witches come to life before our eyes. It adds a little depth to the picture. Thanks for sharing and best of luck!


  • Scyphon
    November 28, 2008

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    This was awesome, I love the rhymes, not feeling forced
    The flow was beautiful and the imagery I had taken in from their calls of salvation from doom, Well done. Best of luck in the contest


  • Rhythm Child
    November 28, 2008

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    i have to send this to my friend they would LOVE IT
    as i do but this person loved witches lolz
    beautiful picture and it had to take a good poem to keep the attention on the words
    which this did


  • Overcast
    November 28, 2008
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    The image and poem seem to be made for each other.Nice!!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 28, 2008

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    this is not blah, you lied to me, this is far from it, this is all good, nice to see your pen is still shining, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    I don't see anything wrong with this poem at all. You did an outstanding job with this piece. I love this chant that you've written. You did fine, don't worry .. and no this doesn't suck at all.

    I love you
    good luck
    mommy


  • Amera gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    You took the picture prompt and made it come alive with a beautiful rhyming chant. Well done!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Ken-Maverick
    November 28, 2008

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    Rhyme
    Very well done here,
    I flowed all the way through with lovely imagery aswell
    Great!

    All the best to you in the contest

    Ken


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    how original ! I love the entire cooncept of good wwitches becomeing evil... your words are perfect!!

    becca

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