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HawkWind Moth


You came to my room
Slept in my lonely bed
And left....


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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 29, 2008
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    love the title ~ very engaging... x


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 28, 2008

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    hmmm, kind of interesting, i saw it all play out in my head, a real mind poker, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • MonAmourEternel
    November 28, 2008
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    Profonde Meaning ..

    Nicely penned.

    All the best for the contest

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    Bin