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[ I want passion ]

I want passion
I listen to songs
they have passion
why can't i feel anymore...

I want your hugs to haunt me,
i want your kisses to stay. longer.

I hate myself
you hate myself
but wont say that
because you love,
not my body...

what can i do,
I want to cry.

I have to change every i am
i wish, i WISH i wasn't me

I want to skinny
I can'tdo it
I wish i didn't look like me

pictures turn out fat,
I am fat

I am rambling
I hate me!

I want to be your perfect girl
then the kisses will last longer
the passion will be stronger,
I know i can do it
if only i could change who i am...

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