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See The Rainbow Tumble.

Hear a whisper in a rainbow
colours start to cry
a songbird in lament
plummets from the sky.

Glisten in a teardrop
catch a sad refrain
paint my dreams with grey
hide them in the rain.

Together going nowhere
destiny's unseen
let me fly with wings
that beat with what has been.

See the rainbow tumble
splinter into loss
deny the lovers faith
hang it from the cross.



Author notes

Option 4 - Word Bank.
Rainbow
- Together
- Glisten
- Grey
- Fly
- Whisper

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    Wow you certainly used the words to create such a sad, lonely piece. Such amazing flow, rhyme and imagery int his.
    Well done to you and all the best in the contest
    Gaylene


  • Hannie
    November 28, 2008

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    That was an incredible write. Just perfectly beautiful. Thanks a bunch for entering and good luck!!

    Hannie.