she can lose herself
in the forest
she can strip herself down,
get back to nature
forget music
forget facebook
forget..
and do what she wants
the thing others look dirtly at
she wants herself to throb,
to swell
to feel agian
she sees the forest
she can lose herself in there
but she has respect out there,
and wants that more...
so she doesn't give in,
and walks away, horse following her steps...
looking back only to wonder
what if...
A contest entry
- The Enchanted Forest-adults only by JinSays.
404 points, ended December 2, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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what if.
great ending.
thank you, and best wishes.
Love,
jin
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I love the imagery of your poem. Good luck in the contest
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