Grand, long novels of science fiction
and fantasy, in a philosophic,
and teaching parable style:
just sitting
in my mind --
dusty.
I poured out my heart
in poetry with you.
And still I wait.
I may die, before finishing this prose,
with its very long,
and in depth storyline.
In his Divine plan
we transcend
from small to smaller ...
to perfection.
In a list
A contest entry
- The Answer... by poeticcaresses.
610 points, ended December 2, 2008, 19 entries
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Sharpened like pencil to a point
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I write books but am no good at poetry.
I think your one of the best writters here sweet one
Good luck in contest.
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As long as we wage war, burn fossil fuel and are stopped in our tracks by paradox and lack of perception we will not be able to produce anything that goes beyond our own mortality. Fortunately some do not waste their time on such matters. Thank you for creating and sharing precious Muse. I wish you all the best in the contest with this magnificent poetic pondering. Ack.
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I have so little idea how to write a book, even a short piece is full of failed starts. Life is in the details and practical moments, small but necessary, and when they are done, that is as perfect as we are likely to be. Like all of us, your poetry is a biography with autobiographical parts; the book may happen.
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I'm pretty sure we're not yet well equipped to handle the smallest...because the universe is infinite. Size only matters on the macrocosmic scale. This is the scale we live on. But you're on the plan. And someday this profound piece may be seen as a quaint treatise. A nod to infinity with an inlet to the gods of the well defined, but limited psychology of the olden days.
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Oopsie. I forgot these. Hehe
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I've missed your poetry. I am so glad to be back! I loved this one! You are so talented. Good luck in the contest, although you do not need luck. This is Gold right here!
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