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Deception

Beauty,
courage,
deception;
shrouds behind the raw smile
of a true Monalisa...


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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 29, 2008
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    creatively expressive... x


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 28, 2008
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    ooo...I like the Monalisa part..nice write

    Good luck


  • Kari gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    I love that movie Monalisa with Julia Roberts and actually own that one..I'd never thought to have gone down this path with it.
    Nice job.