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And The Angel Said.

And the Angel said,
"All your need be gone,
In the prayers this night I read,"

She did spread her wings,
They in offering,
As she flew above my bed,

Then she took me there,
To a place of care,
Where no pain or worry found,

She did show me then,
All the stars so bright,
As we flew above the ground,

"This a dream I asked?
To awaken from,
And this heaven is it not real?"

She did answer soft,
As we touched the sky,
And my heart her wings did sail!

"Leave the earth behind!
You have done your task,
Now your prayers be answered all!"

"Here you wings I gift,
They your dreams to fly,
And your heart to never fall!"

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  • hawkeslake gold member
    December 1, 2008

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    This is very mystical and full of hope; it feels more like a song, but many songs are also chants, like prayers. Nicely done!


  • Denerica
    November 29, 2008

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    Calling all angels...it was beautiful, just feeling the encampment and visitation of this angel...blessings.


  • Periwinkle Blue
    November 28, 2008

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    Oh, so lovely, my oh my YES!

    What a fine poet you are! Every stanza is beautifully set and I congratulate you for using your talent so well.