I am Jack's wallet and right now I am empty
with the exception of some plastic
but it will not last long.
He liked the girls too much
and they draind his savings
because it was not
that much anyways.
He liked amazons
dominant women.
The kind that spank
and do other things.
Unfortanetly for Jack
they demanded his money
and he gave.
So now he sits in this run down office
and stares at the walls trying
to figure out how this happened.
My how we forget
how Rome was sacked.
In a list
A contest entry
- I am Jack's.... by suzume.
700 points, ended December 14, 2008, 13 entries
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Pretty simplistic, yet I love how it is all wrapped up. Just love that last stanza.
Thanks for entering -
lol, i think if i am not careful i may end up the say way as jack, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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LOL
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The most valuable items in one's wallet are not the paper money, but it is the photos
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LOL... the opening lines were so damn brilliant! ...and the ending was fantastic.....
Pen on!
peace. -
so true lol
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