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Grateful Thought Today

Awaking from slumber,
Opening eyes on new day...
Blissful for glorious life.

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I hope that this works for the contest. Haed to only use twelve words! Thank you for lettingme try! Blessed be!

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 29, 2008
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    very enlightening take... x


  • delightfulmess silver member
    November 28, 2008

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    Well it is wonderful to see a happy take on the pic. Well done with you 12 words.


    Delila