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In My Own Time


In my own time,
chasing sunlight,soaring with a kite;
counting raindrops, tasting dewdrops.
A peaceful morn, was lastly born.

In my own time,
lighting the lake, the moon was to wake;
blinking to us, glittering were the stars.
A special eve, softly took its leave.

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  • Lady Michaella
    February 19

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    this is beautiful... i love your interesting form, and the rhyme is fantastic.. the flow is also very good
    i love the repetition of it.. well done!

    Thanks for entering.. and best of luck in my contest!
    ~~Lemon Bee~~


  • Tadd
    February 2
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    great write

  • piccola silver member
    January 27
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    nicely done thank you


  • star girl
    January 10

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    simple

    its simple but nice!
    Its nice that you filled it with this great imagery!
    Thanks for entering!
    Good luck!


  • raiining sunshine
    January 2
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    the way your poem gives an image is probably the best thing, aside from the words... i say:Bravo!


  • heavenbird
    December 4, 2008
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    This is very nice, and filled with wonderful imagery.
    =]
    Good luck.


  • Ignored
    November 29, 2008

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    Thanks for entering!

    Hey nice write here i really like it. Im glad you entered this contest, i enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • Rhythm Child
    November 28, 2008

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    very beautiful poem, i can see this catching on
    the wording was lovely
    a really great write

    glad to have ya in the group

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