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Cycle Continues

Everything has changed too fast.
People i thought would stay have disappeared.
Those who i thought were gone have returned full force,
Taking the place of another.

It wasn't suppose to be like this...
This story was suppose to have a happy ending.
Instead it ended up in a tragdey,
Romeo and Juliet have nothing on me...

This is what i get for believing good could happen.
I am once again missing something i knew that was good,
now its ripped from me again.
This cycle has to stop before i totally break...

what do you think?

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  • Tadd
    November 30, 2008
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    realy good,
    realy well writen.


  • Lexie
    November 28, 2008

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    wow, this is a cycle, a feeling i know. and many of us know. great way to tell it in a poem though. i could feel your feelings, your message, it also made me reflect on what i had in common with this poem (a lot) great job.