Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

mysterious

Missing image
chill craving warmth
floating feverish desires.

caught between extremes
souls cooling heels.

Author notes

picture by ~ A. Everitt

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 29, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    creatively drawn... x


  • delightfulmess silver member
    November 28, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    oooh a lovely take on the picture.
    You certainly did not waste any words here

    Well done and best of luck in the contest.



    Delila


  • Mozaic
    November 28, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Nice take on the prompt...very deep in such few words. Good luck in the contest!