After his petit morte
he lay enshrouded, silent,
I called a taxi.
Author notes
Painting by A. Everitt
A contest entry
- just 12 words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 29, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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truly compelling... x
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ooooh... a very telling piece
I loved where you took this.
Best of luck in the contest.


Delila

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Nice take on modern day 'as a matter of fact' times...good luck in the contest!




