Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Enshrouded

Missing image
After his petit morte
he lay enshrouded, silent,
I called a taxi.

Author notes

Painting by A. Everitt

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 29, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    truly compelling... x


  • delightfulmess silver member
    November 28, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    ooooh... a very telling piece
    I loved where you took this.
    Best of luck in the contest.



    Delila


  • Mozaic
    November 28, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Nice take on modern day 'as a matter of fact' times...good luck in the contest!