As light bends shadows
rebound leaves my bed
regret climbs in after...
A contest entry
- just 12 words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 29, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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uniquely engaging... x
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WOW the depth is wonderful in so few words.
Excellent take. best of luck in the contest.
Delila
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Thanks Delila!
Not a problem at all...I'm a sucker for the heavy shorter ones! I end up going through the whole list of such amazing writers, almost waiting fro the next entry to pop up
~Mo
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amazing take on the prompt...[lalim grabe]
yes for most girls...regrets climbs in after...used...and used bed
for me, this is gold
Anna Lee
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Woot~woot!
Thanks Ms AL...means a lot to have a fellow kababayan poet rooting for & being egged on & up for the challenge! Which btw I loved yours as well if you haven't already read
Your words mean so much...TY
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Ohh... I've been here... I'd recognise it anywhere! x
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Yay!!!! Nice to see you back in the saddle again I missed all my friends on here...I thought I was the only one that went AWOL for awhile
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nice take on the picture. empty bed filled with emotions...
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