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primal

catching traces of your scent
i start hunting you in my bedsheets

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12 words

A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 29, 2008
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    cleverly creative... x


  • delightfulmess silver member
    November 28, 2008

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    oooh... a lonely yet hot take.
    Wonderful 12 words.

    Delila


  • Dalaney gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    this seems to be a continuation of your poem, Lost Woman, Poet (12 word comment) Love, Lane


  • Frances Nightengale
    November 28, 2008

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    Haha, wow. Makes me think of the song "Hungry like the Wolf" by Duran Duran, lol. I really like this


  • Mozaic
    November 28, 2008

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    A great depiction of the title & prompt...good luck in the contest!

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