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Hard Work

Dirty hands - paint, mud, Spackle
and calluses.
Paint splashed pants
ripped.
Sturdy boots
muddy.
Scruffy beard,
Tired eyes,
Aching muscles.
Go to bed, wake up,
and do it again...
Remember that I love you.

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  • samantha jean
    November 28, 2008
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    Very interesting piece, I love the last line - it was very unexpected.
    Great write.