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Do you want to know why?

The coke
Beers
Strangers in and out of your room.

You were about to let her put down the dog.

You let them take your house.

Oh-
and what happened to all that money?

You asked me:
"He seems distant"

He's not as forgiving as I am.

Please tell me what you think

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