Bring to me your passions
And carry on your lusts
My eyes are lakes of fire
The windows to my soul
Which burn in blazing wonder
At your gaping, frozen hole
Sweeping me to madness
I quiver 'neath your gaze
All mem'ries of our past
Forgotten, painful haze
O speak to me in whispers!
O look into my eyes!
Banish me no longer!
Come dance between my thighs!
Bring to me your passions
And carry on your lusts
The night is cold and shadowed
The land is draped in mist
Be now to me my lover
Awake in me my bliss
Turn from me no longer
But hold me to your heart
Caress my tender body
Tear me not apart
O gasp my name in darkness!
O feel my body rise!
Kiss my trembling mouth, love!
Come dance between my thighs!
Bring to me your passions
And carry on your lusts
My blood pounds through each vein, love
My senses come alive
If you but kiss my neck, love
Our passion shall survive
My body beckons to you
Shroud in crimson lace
I know you hear my spirit
By the look upon your face
O pull me to your temple!
O claim your moistened prize!
I'll be your heart's desire...
Come dance between my thighs!
A contest entry
- Should I Stay...Or Should I Go?????? by azlyn.
739 points, ended December 10, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I'm bookmarking this piece. It is simply too good to lose in the shuffle.
I would have to agree with the general consensus here: that last stanza is a work of art in of itself. Bravo. I sure wanted to stay...
-Niur Tarow
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Thanks! I'm very glad that my piece is so well liked! Blessings...
S
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'Oh pull me to your temple
O claim your moistened prize
I'll be your heart desire...
Come dance between my thighs!'
A wonderful invitation...
a splendid write...
Kisses all over, darling!
Gal
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Thanks! Ever so glad you liked it... thanks for the comment and for reading my work. Kisses back *wink wink* ;-)
S
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Breathlessly I say..."That was BEAUTIFUL!!!" The plea...the longing...the desire dripping from every word. I was convinced to STAY! Brilliant work here Sis...thank you so much for this lovely entry. Amazing in so many ways.
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Thanks, sister! I am so delighted that you liked it so much! It flowed out pretty well and quickly. For you! Blessed be, dearest!
S
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