It has been three days of top roman now
and payday is three days a way.
I don't think I can take much more.
Car is on its running spare
for the last two days.
My shoe is wrapped in duck tape
that I stole from work.
Rent is dew tomorrow
and the power was shut off.
Why do I feel like things will get better?
I’ve no clue, just a feeling.
The bottom has to be close
When you fall all the way down
it is all up from there.
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt. by Jade.Butterfly.
500 points, ended November 30, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You know i don't wanna blurt out peoples buisness on here but this was Awesome because there were parts in this poem that he has told me about and so many times that he felt thiw way [down and out]..
This one sturck a nerve.
Great job!
-Mandi
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Thank you Mandi for the silver and for your lovely comments
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you know that is why i like to think of myself a loser sometimes cause there is only one way for me to go, and that is up, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Good work!
I can relate to some of this. -
bloody hell this is good
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