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The Hidden Path

Missing image

Wind blown ancient grass,
where flows hidden mountain stream,
lies yesterday's path.

 

 

Author notes

Image: County Kildare, Ireland; the place of my ancestor's birth.

The Hidden Path is dedicated to my late grandmother, Mollie: http://allpoetry.com/poem/2302515

 

 

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  • Maxboy gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    Beautiful words with a picture to match and a wonderful dedecation to your grandmother.



  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 28, 2008

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    kind of like the road less traveled, but it kind of holds some stronger meaning, i think keep it flowing.