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embraced




the breath of a butterfly
cascading across
carnation pink blossoms ~

these are your hands
that hold me

in a delicate composition of love

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prompt: affection

A contest entry

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    If anyone can express the compostition of love it is my sweet sister, you just rocked me with this one. I want to write like you when I grow up Congratulations on your bronze


  • innocence jaded.xx
    November 29, 2008

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    Wow. Incredible. & absolutely beautiful. I love how you wrote this. It was so cleverly penned and you showed affection so brilliantly. Thanks for entering & good luck ♥