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green eyes








each day I stand between winter
and my soul ~
waiting for that shadow
to open its vein
releasing
acid raindrops that blur my vision;

these thoughts
can be life-threatening.  

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prompt: jealousy

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    Isn't that just the truth, jealousy is one of the worst traits a person can have. I love where you took this, colouring outside the lines just enough. I would have given gold


  • innocence jaded.xx
    November 28, 2008

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    Amazing take on the prompt. You worded it so beautifully and creatively, and I could just feel jealousy seeping from the page. Incredibleee♥