Rubik's Cube

I've gave you everything I had,
Let you hold my Rubik's cube heart.
You had every algorithm down,
But still my best wasn't good enough.

I knew she always meant more to you,
With her immortal smile and unintentional laughter.
Apparently "serious" doesn't exist

In your paper-thin vocabulary,
And I guess my blocks don't budge

Under you fingers anymore.

Author notes

Eh, I went over 50. But I can't change anything without taking anything out that is important. >.<

Oh well, I tried.
-ChunkyC

A contest entry

emotion quickie. [1/4♥] by innocence jaded.xx. 400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 10 entries
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innocence jaded.xx
November 28, 2008

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Oooh, I must say that I really like this ! It was so brilliantly penned, and I like how you related jealousy to the Rubiks cube. Amazing :]♥