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Not Far

Let's deal thanksgiving, to The One above
Who keeps on Living, by Eternal Love
Oh, let's give some thanks, to the Great I AM
Float on to Gold Banks, sup with the Pure Lamb

Oh, My God, You are
The Best thing 'bout life
No comparison
To The Holy One
I can find no strife
Knowing You're not far

When I am told that, my Lord is not real
I fall down, faceflat, Your Spirit Revealed
Oh, let's celebrate, for the Perfect Love
Enter Pearly Gates, keep to Christ thereof

Oh, My God, You are
The Best thing 'bout life
No comparison
To The Holy One
I can find no strife
Knowing You're not far

Author notes

A set of lyrics for the Great God Almighty.
Shortened and not finished for contest reasons.
Comments and Critique always welcomed!
Hope you enjoy and God Bless!
-ZeInkslinger

A contest entry

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    December 3, 2008

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    This is a sweet poem written in the praise of God.
    Nice flow.

    Thanks for your entry.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • Kappa Pyua
    November 28, 2008

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    I liked these words of praise that you have put together, I can't wait to read the rest of it after the contest is over, chow, UNT,


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    wonderful
    well done

    inspirational prayer in song
    lovely to read with a musical flow.
    God bless you my friend...