I don’t quite think that it was
just the green-eyed monster pulling the string
there had to be something there
when you
kissed me
and ran to comfort her...
I’m sure it was worth it
why buy the cow when
she spits out poetry
spiked with lies
just as I would gold...
I am not her
Author notes
just admit you really wanted her
not me..
bleh
i really dont know where this came out of
manda
A contest entry
- emotion quickie. [1/4♥] by innocence jaded.xx.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
astroturf?
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F*ck me- so bloomin' good...
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Sad, bitter, heartbroken. Hm...your wording in this piece was lovely.
'I don’t quite think that it was
just the green-eyed monster pulling the string
there had to be something there
when you
kissed me'
This conjures up kind of a spooky image...because it's so relatable and common.
Then he runs to the other girl soon as she's hurt
"oh, we're just friends."
maybe he even means it, but that doesn't change the fact that HE WANTS HER. not you. Never expierienced this myself, but I can sympathize.
I also love your ending.
'I am not her.'
And we never will be....
Great poem, srry about the novel.
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Wow. This is me to a "t" right now. You said it perfectly. I hear you 100%♥
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:[
ill kill em
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hahah
good luck with that
hahah
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