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from the cloud nine--

Inundating in extreme ecstasy
my love, soaring to new heights
defines quickly
the joyous and delightful  life

Naked or fully dressed
he loves me with the same sheen
caring  and caressing
he protects me in the same  lean

Swimming in streams of affection
he admires me with all the love
He eulogizes
the rose petal like  tenderness of my skin

Tasting my nectar oozing lips
he feels as if skiing in the dreams about heaven
and he lastly embraces me
with lot of hugs showered all through from  the cloud nine

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    very sensual write. "skiing in the dreams about heaven" "swimming in streams of affection" lovely

    Good luck