writings mirroring self
in cyberspace
pain i just cant let go
lends itself to strangers
who know not exactly
how their works effect others
he is let down
deflated in this
gravity fueled world
and i
the soul that needs
to mourn
a loss
his anger
hurt
and
rejection
heals me
inside
out
dissappearance
brings worry
for someone
who does not even know
i exist
yet somehow
i send comfort through
internet waves
and wishes
holiday wear and tear
leads me to home
and the knowing
that someone
somewhere
wants to read what i wrote
and listen
Author notes
your a favorite of mine. i recently divorced my wife. the separation was heart breaking and i fed off of your hurt when i couldnt feel my own ... your writings inspired me and helped me cope with loss. ... thank you ...
A contest entry
- for my favorites by leander.
900 points, ended December 30, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a very well written hope - and I honestly do hope you've entered something in the contest I opened the same time as this one - for those who have me on their favorites, but that I don't have on mine...
Thanks for your author's notes as well - it touches me to see there's at least one person who can someone understand my scribblings...
Leander
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