Back from the sun towards the shadow edge of life
Truth unfold revealing the fragile barrier
Crumbling into dust blinded my vision of the happening
F.a.l.l.i.n.g. A/w/a/y entering the uncertainty
Invisible line can't fathom the emotional heart
Dropping me like a bullet in a loud shattering cry
In the flash of the night...in this heartbeat of time
Blindly walking into a maze of confusion
Distinctive illusion can't outline the whole concept of what's truly there
F.a.l.l.i.n.g. A/w/a/y one shard at a time
At the doorstep on the other side of realism
Uttering those nonexistent words in silence
[You've pulled me by the heart string ~Unbeknownst to you...I'm bleeding]
Just being one out of those million shattering shards
I'll gladly injecting myself with that poisoning addiction
Just being a fool in denial bottling up both of our burdens
You're like my breathing spell..the air is just too suffocating
I'm a compulsive drinker..drowning in my own solace
...So calculating ..so please tell me how much more you're breaking me...
[Being coerced into a path of destruction away from that happily ever after]
Author notes
I found this pic it goes so well with my poem:
http://kechake.deviantart.com/art/Sad-kitten-details-94517382
that's what you get when you let your heart win
Comments
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Beautifull write it flows so perfectly even though it is so sad. Ah the barrier's we put on our own lives sometimes and even those that were put there for us. I love that line "You're like my breathing spell..the air is just too suffocating
I'm a compulsive drinker..drowning in my own solace
...So calculating ..so please tell me how much more you're breaking me...
[Being coerced into a path of destruction away from that happily ever after"
You just keep your chin up and I am positive you will find your way back to that "happily ever after."
Excellent write!!
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Wow the emotion just flows from this poem. I love it. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!
Megan -
A dramatic poem that makes one's heart beat a little faster and one's mind to come awake! 
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nice....
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