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Written in Ink

If you believe in me
I will believe in you
For as the east wind blows
So will the Orchid caress the child
the seed becomes the tree
And mountains will rise to sky
Animals cooing babies mother young
Jungles become fields
and lakes become seas
For all that came and all that went
Is a poem Written in Ink

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 28, 2008

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    this was beautifully done and just a wonderful form of expression, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • toomysterious
    November 27, 2008

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    What a beautiful thought and expression, everything, a poem. Good luck in the contest. Hope they enjoy as much as I did.