Though words lead to
illusions
transparent upon verses,
unique remain the feelings
shared, confided
tucked into hearts.
In spite of distance, your
words kindle smiles,
unlock veiled thoughts and stay
safe in my mind.
In exchange, I offer you
my hand (even though so far)
to brush away your sorrow
and balm your eyes
so they can see a better tomorrow
after the rain.
Author notes
To my dear friend Rj, a poet I had the luck to meet on his first day on this site.
http://allpoetry.com/Rj
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HOODWINKED !
This is a beautiful and touching poem that reaches out to another, kind words from a kind heart. Very well done!
Write on dear Poet.
You have been Hoodwinked by the Poetic Bandits today because WE CARE!
Dennis 
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gorgeous
I click and the talisman brings me here!! like my 'anti-matter' met the heart of the 'matter'...from the smiles and "balm your eyes" just about everything in this one is a ray of hope!
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I love the beauty of the heart you have shared through this warm and wonderful poetic venture..well done..thanks for sharing..
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This is so gentle, loving, and emotive. I love the softeness of it and that last line--just beautiful.
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Precious~
Oh My Word~ See this is the third one I missed
Oy!!! Were these hidden in a vault or something
Excellent tribute- dedication~ for a person I am not familiar with but I imagine a Wonderful Spirit
Gorgeous this is!
Gosh the first person I met on here...taps chin
-asks for brain transplant-
I might hurt myself if I think too hard
j/k
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Mari
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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thank you
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I love the title of this. And this is a wonderful poem. A beautiful dedication
Very sweet and lovely indeed.
Much love
Ylova
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This sings of Mari,
in perfect word-tunes.
A wonderful tribute.
M-C
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A single smile, a single day
Who knew with time that it would stay
A single hi, no written script
That hand extend, now as life hits
Hugs...Eddy
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what a nice tribute for your friend. words for all of us to smile by~
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You met Rj on day one? Wow. I bet the ones I met were all crazies who wrote cutting poems and wicca stuff...sorry all you wiccans but you are what you are.
Send hate mail to :
Nothing better than a kind word, during tough times. I know you've done that for me and I also remember how Mi helped me out when I first came back to Maine. Who told me this: "Don't try to fix it, just listen?" Whoever it was gave be one of the best lessons of my life...that and it's twin..."It's not about me, so I should just shut my mouth and listen."
Anyway, beautiful words---we all want to be liked and to know that people like us...in my case I am pleased if they can tolerate me.
First day...I don't know what is more remarkable, that you have a friend from your first day, or that you actually remember that fact...as you know, I wouldn't remember it.
One for you, one for Rj, but tell him you gave it to him...we guys don't do that sort of thing.
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Thanks
I met him on his 1st day and was also the first to comment on his 1st post. The Rj caught my attention, Rio de Janeiro...
Since then he has been listening to my crazy talk with lots of patiences
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shared, confided
tucked into hearts.
In spite of distance, your
words kindle smiles,
unlock veiled thoughts and stay
safe in my mind.
smiling...just smiling
and just like when I was new...you were the first I have met here at AP...and until now, you are always here for me.
Thank you Mari
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Ah, thank you!!! beautiful Anna
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