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I am Jack's...

I am jack's nasal cavities
Offended by your presence
I will send a message to Jack's brain
And tell him he should cringe

I am Jack's eyeballs
Disgusted with your appearance
I will send a message to Jack's brain
And tell him turn away

I am Jack's decency
Saddened by your situation
I will send a message to Jack's heart
And tell him he should care

Author notes

About the typical response to the homeless and less fortunate

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  • Lady Altheia
    January 2

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    Some peole just are dehumanized to care and the one's that do, think why should I? Keep on wirting.


  • suzume
    December 14, 2008
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    Liked it. Short but very to the point and decently expressed.

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