in a room
with four white walls
and no window
which I can see
is an eerie silence
so loud
it's driving me into
a pit of insanity
I hear the voices
inside my head
no longer alone am I
inside a room
with four white walls
and no window
which I can see
with an eerie silence
so loud
it's driving me into
a pit of insanity
A contest entry
- Trapped by UnravledLove.
1100 points, ended December 8, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Picture Inspiration by Firequeen.
700 points, ended April 27, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Interesting
I enjoyed this
thank you for your entry
keep the ink flowing
fire
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if you weren't out of your mind when you were put in, you would be after you had been there a while.
An expressive write.
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Hmm. This is pretty neat. Your in a white room because people thought you were insane but being here proves you weren't. Good Luck and thank you for entering.
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Very interesting construction.
To me you captured the essence of what it must be like for people who are trapped in their own minds. Very disturbing and effective.
Well done,
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