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I wouldn't have it any other way

Silence
The only noise that can be heard
though the vastness of my mind
Darkness
The only sight that can be seen
I am blinded, deaf, alone
I wouldn't have it any other way

The darkness draws me, fufills me
Keeps me going that one more day
The darkness finds me, shows me
That I can finish the race

Hate keeps me going, hate keeps me alive
The darkness has changed me
Turned my light into darkness
My love into hate, I've changed

And I wouldn't have it any other way

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  • technicolor wonder
    January 10

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    nice. this is powerful and dark, it's easy to relate to (at least for me) and well written. nicely done.


  • chilali
    November 28, 2008

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    You are writing again! And I loved this! Awesome! Just awesome! Good luck in the contest love!