Behold you are here
upon the stretch of mind
and landscape of fertility;
a garden of ingenuity
flowered with love's
endless life-wish.
And as you blow
the dandelion and watch
flysparks of desires
surface the crescent
of hope -
just stand there
watch, and wish
beyond the stars
and from the deepest
cornerstone of
dreams.
A contest entry
- the crescent of maternal moon by Pamela A Lamppa.
1050 points, ended December 1, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It is indeed a life-wish. A beautiful dream to stand on the cornerstone of dreams.
I have often wished to stand on the stretch of mind - and rescue dreams from their float, making them realities. Within this beauty, I feel there is hope.
This is such a gorgeous poem. Simply beautiful. Thank you for adding this gem to my contest.
~Pamela 
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Beautiful metaphors here
This is one of your best poems, so tranquil and written with such rich, delicate detail as if you pieced together the fragments of a stained glass picture. Bravo
~ Ink
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"watch, and wish
beyond the stars"
I really loved this piece, the lines above especially. They seem to say that you can have it all, don't think the sky is just the limit. Amazing.
Carrie
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A stunning take
It has a nice dreamy feel...
Well done and best of luck in the contest.
Delila
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thank you so much for the awesome comment.
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