The snake stirs
Slowly unwinding
Gracefully
Gently
Sacred Kundalini
Red is his colour
The colour of blood exposed to sunlight
He is passion rising like magma from within the sacred chamber of the volcano
Pulsing emotions spin like a whirring top
Body changing in intensity
The snake strikes
Passion exploding
The snake settles in restful contemplation
Author notes
Option number 3
A contest entry
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wow.
this poem is intense.
Im impressed.
I wish you the best in this contest.
Love,
jin
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A nice metaphor
This is a nice metaphor, very passionate indeed.
TC
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Wow, fantastic spiritual write that really spoke to me xx Thanks so much for your entry xx goodluck xx
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This is wonderful writing, speaks to me of tantric love a union within everything..spiritual awakening. This has wonderful feel to it.
A pleasure to read, good luck
~sugar~
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Loved your title and how it fits the poem so well... There's something about longing and emotions like jealousy, rage,etc which are reffered to as a snake uncoiling in one's belly; in Indian culture. You have put this together splendidly!
Great write! B' luck!
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Wow... This is great. There are many layers of meaning in this. Wonderful!
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I like this - great images. And loved your title, too.
best wishes in your contest.
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Great interpretation of the subject.
I didn't get the connection at first, until I went to wikipedia to look up "Kundalini." In terms of Tantric Yoga your rendering in this poem is fabulous.
Great write. Very illuminating .
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