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it is here that wires cross - -

my eyes fold over,
blank synapses fading- - -









with every breath












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x--Atelophobia--x

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A contest entry

kind but constructive criticism please.

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    January 5

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    I actually really liked this one again
    Very creative with the writing and everything, well done

    Thanks for your entry,
    I wish you the best of luck!
    Claire x


  • innocence jaded.xx
    November 28, 2008

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    Hah. Wow, that's pretty much amazinggg! That's pretty much me in a nutshell =/ Eckk. Good luck in that contest love♥ This was beautiful