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Association

In the company of any sister's I've sat
hearing out their souls from paper flesh
each being different in skill and expression
Turn after turn we rose to the occasion
every piece brought alive by our soul's conflagration
but it never retreated after the poems were done
Now judging began by only benevolent means
helping sharpen the senses we left dull
thicking our skin as we learn from our past.

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